Wow that was sooooo great!

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I really enjoyed the tension before the 'birth' as it's a really tactile and uncomfortable build up mimicking the narrator's internal pressure; and then the final release is so welcome after all the build up (I loved the list, it prolonged the relief) so much so that the next step is extra traumatic.

It made me actually panic sweat.

I'm looking forward to you posting more stuff!

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