11 Comments

This made my knees weak, well done.

Expand full comment
author

Thank you!

Expand full comment

This made me squirm a bit. The way you go on the body is so good in this piece. Love the voice too.

Expand full comment
author

Thanks, Rabbi! Really appreciate it, dude.

Expand full comment

Yikes! You are so good at the visceral stuff. And I totally thought I was subscribed to you, wtf?!

Expand full comment
author

Thank you, Maegan! And no worries about being subscribed -- having my stuff read by people is enough for me.

Expand full comment

I’m hurting after reading this. And maybe a little queasy. And also glad I do not have a nipple ring.

Expand full comment
author

My hope is that this short story will one day do to nipple piercings what ‘Jaws’ did to the ocean.

Expand full comment

This one is also very good Brandan, makes me wanna go and write.

Expand full comment
author

Thank you, man. I really appreciate that.

Expand full comment

also - love 'ScumStack'

Expand full comment